This is a poem I have made about landing on the moon and what it would probably feel like for most people. Is this a good short poem? What is the best thing about this poem?
It is awesome to see you have completed a few of the week one activities this week already!
I absolutely love your poem. I think the best part about your poem is the ending…’I hope the aliens don’t wake up with a fright’. It made me think...I wonder if there are any living things on the moon? Wonder what they would look like… would they look like us? When I read that your body lit up like a christmas tree that made me think of you being really excited to be on the moon - is that what you meant? Well done Liam. I really enjoyed reading your poem and I love the background picture. Did you find the picture on the internet? For future posts, please remember to include a link to where you borrowed the image from too.
Keep it up. I can’t wait to see more blog posts by you over the summer.
Hi again Liam,
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I absolutely love your poem. I think the best part about your poem is the ending…’I hope the aliens don’t wake up with a fright’. It made me think...I wonder if there are any living things on the moon? Wonder what they would look like… would they look like us? When I read that your body lit up like a christmas tree that made me think of you being really excited to be on the moon - is that what you meant? Well done Liam. I really enjoyed reading your poem and I love the background picture. Did you find the picture on the internet? For future posts, please remember to include a link to where you borrowed the image from too.
Keep it up. I can’t wait to see more blog posts by you over the summer.
Leisha
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